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posted 2.2.2013

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2nd Feb 2013, 12:47 AM

umbrella_policy

wow. killer art work! interesting structure!

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6th Feb 2013, 12:36 AM

sharpened_haze

I'm glad you like it. I would like to achieve a stream-of-consciousness effect, but sometimes I wonder if the format is just confusing to readers apart from myself... :)

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24th Feb 2013, 4:04 PM

Kalegiro

Well it's definitely confusing, but I think stream-of-consciousness is supposed to be confusing for the reader.
It's like an unfiltered window to someone's mind.

I like it.

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6th Mar 2013, 11:19 PM

sharpened_haze

There is certainly truth in that...although as the plot begins to move along, I hope most of the confusion will be remedied...and thank you

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